My improvements

I’m always dreaming of a ideal world. I forced to keep it unchanged, but in vain. Great goals run through my fingers as sand. If the same melody can’t have the previous influence, that wouldn’t be disappointing. Keeping is the sin actually. The reason is simple. The world gives us the images of ideal worlds, which would never be an ideal one. The ideal worlds come from ideal spirits.
However, what makes the world still appreciable is that it provides the ideal encounter.