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It is a sea of elements that there exist() to be responsible for my perspective.
There appear a multitude of causes lead to my viewpoint.
強調句：
It is the gene of innovation that builds a glorious company which brings great changes to our lives.
As the picture shows,we have witnessed a huge development in information technology during the past decades,which has reshaped the way we live,learn and play.（正如圖片所示，在過去的幾十年裏，我們見證了信息技術的巨大發展，這改變了我們的生活、學習和娛樂方式。）Indeed,the mobile Internet and other inventions enhance,promote and boost our life quality,（獨立主格）with our daily events made more convenient.（事實上，移動互聯網和其他發明促進、提升和提升我們的生活質量，我們的日常活動更方便。）
There are many factors contributing to this sorry state of affairs.（有很多因素導致了這種糟糕的狀況）
Living in such a bad environment, what can we do to protect t ourselves? （生活在這樣一個糟糕的環境中，我們能做些什麼來保護自己呢？）The following tips provide some effective methods to fight against the haze. （下面的建議提供了一些有效的方法來對抗霧霾。）