轉自‘海巖秋沙’的QQ空間：
以下是從一個朋友轉載來的，關於英文投稿過程中編輯給出的意見。與大家一起分享。
以下12點無輕重主次之分。每一點內容由總結性標題和代表性審稿人意見構成。
1、目標和結果不清晰。
It is noted that your manuscript needs careful editing by someone with expertise in technical English editing paying particular attention to English grammar, spelling, and sentence structure so that the goals and results of the study are clear to the reader.
2、未解釋研究方法或解釋不充分。
◆ In general, there is a lack of explanation of replicates and statistical me
thods used in the study.
◆ Furthermore, an explanation of why the authors did these various experiments
should be provided.
3、對於研究設計的rationale:
Also, there are few explanations of the rationale for the study design.
4、誇張地陳述結論/誇大成果/不嚴謹：
The conclusions are overstated. For example, the study did not show
if the side effects from initial copper burst can be avoid with the polymer formulation.
5、對hypothesis的清晰界定：
A hypothesis needs to be presented。
6、對某個概念或工具使用的rationale/定義概念：
What was the rationale for the film/SBF volume ratio?
7、對研究問題的定義：
Try to set the problem discussed in this paper in more clear,
write one section to define the problem
8、如何凸現原創性以及如何充分地寫literature review:
The topic is novel but the application proposed is not so novel.
9、對claim,如A＞B的證明，verification:
There is no experimental comparison of the algorithm with previously known work, so it is impossible to judge whether the algorithm is an improvement on previous work.
10、嚴謹度問題：
MNQ is easier than the primitive PNQS, how to prove that.
11、格式（重視程度）：
◆ In addition, the list of references is not in our style. It is close but not completely correct. I have attached a pdf file with "Instructions for Authors" which shows examples.
◆ Before submitting a revision be sure that your material is properly prepared and formatted. If you are unsure, please consult the formatting nstructions to authors that are given under the "Instructions and Forms" button in he upper right-hand corner of the screen.
12、語言問題（出現最多的問題）：
有關語言的審稿人意見：
◆ It is noted that your manuscript needs careful editing by someone with expertise in technical English editing paying particular attention to English grammar, spelling, and sentence structure so that the goals and results of the study are clear to the reader.
◆ The authors must have their work reviewed by a proper translation/reviewing service before submission; only then can a proper review be performed. Most sentences contain grammatical and/or spelling mistakes or are not complete sentences.
◆ As presented, the writing is not acceptable for the journal. There are pro
blems with sentence structure, verb tense, and clause construction.
◆ The English of your manuscript must be improved before resubmission. We str
ongly suggest that you obtain assistance from a colleague who is well-versed i
n English or whose native language is English.
◆ Please have someone competent in the English language and the subject matte
r of your paper go over the paper and correct it. ?
◆ the quality of English needs improving.
來自編輯的鼓勵：
Encouragement from reviewers:
◆ I would be very glad to re-review the paper in greater depth once it has be
en edited because the subject is interesting.
◆ There is continued interest in your manuscript titled "……" which you subm
itted to the Journal of Biomedical Materials Research: Part B - Applied Biomat
erials.
◆ The Submission has been greatly improved and is worthy of publication.