2021年杭州中考英語作文大課堂
文/孫雪梅
話題一 Personal background (個人情況)
一．與此話題相關單元
7A Unit 1 My name’s Gina.
7A Unit 8 When is your birthday?
7B Unit 9 What does he look like?
9A Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark.
二．本話題的常用表達
1.My brother is a boy of 15 years old.
2.He was born in on…
3.He spends a lot of time helping others.
4.We should learn from him.
5.His stories encourage me to…
6.There is no doubt that he is a successful…
7.It was my first time to…
8.I am good at telling stories.
9.She’s of medium height, and she has long straight hair.
10.He used to like…, but now he is more interested in…
l 參考諺語
1.Where there is a will, there is a way.
2.Well begun is half done.
3.Practice makes perfect.
4.Everyone has his price.
5.You have to believe in yourself. That’s the secret of success.
三．佳句欣賞與模仿
1. That’s because he was a really good student.
我的媽媽非常強健，那是因爲她每天堅持做運動。
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2. That’s when I decided to change.
我爸爸過去很胖，而且經常生病。醫生建議他要多做運動。那時他決定改變自己。
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3. A. Now she’s not shy anymore and loves singing in front of crowds.
B. So he was no longer interested in studying and missed classes.
我不再肥胖了。
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4. It’s very important for parents to be there for their children.
對孩子們來說與父母溝通很重要。
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5. Her grandparents have had a great influence on Kate.
我的老師對我產生巨大的影響。
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6. To Li Wen’s surprise, their conversation changed his life.
使我驚奇的是，我的媽媽變得越來越美了。
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7. There is no doubt that he is a successful teacher.
毫無疑問，我的媽媽是一位偉大的媽媽。
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四．寫作範例．
初中階段令你印象最深刻的是哪位老師？請用英語寫一篇題爲”The Teacher I will Never Forget” 的作文。
內容包括：1. 教師性格或特長；2. 列舉一個事例；3. 對老師的感謝和祝福。
【參考範文】
The Teacher I will Never Forget
How time flies! Three years has passed since I became a middle school student. I had very good memories of my classmates and teachers. The teacher I never forget is Athena, my English teacher. She had a great influence on me.
She is always serious with us. But she is very kind. For example, English used to be my worst subject, and I didn’t like it at all. But she could always make her class interesting and easy. That made me take an interest in learning English. About two years ago, she found I was worried about my poor grammar. She spent her free time helping me do lots of practice in grammar. She was so patient that I was deeply moved by her. With the help of Athena, I wasn’t worried about my English anymore. That’s why my English is always top now.
There is no doubt that Athena is a great teacher! She made my life full of love. And I wish her a healthy and happy life in the future.
五.實戰演練
假設你叫李華，你校正在招募英語角活動主持人，你想應徵該職位。請你根據下面表格中的內容提示給負責人劉老師寫一封自薦信。
姓名 李華 應徵職位 英語角主持人
自薦理由 1.身體健康，精力充沛；2.英語口語好，有過一年在美國學習的經歷；3……. 4……
要求：自薦信須包括表格中的內容要點，細節可以適當發揮；字數80詞左右，信的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。
Dear Mrs. Liu,
I’m from Class 2, Grade 9. And my name’s Li Hua. I’d love to be the host of our school’s English Corner. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
孫雪梅，筆名竹外疏花，中學英語教師，教學筆記和育人心德多篇，詩作若干，閒暇時與山水相逢，偏愛竹、雲和天空。
2020.08.06